Thesis statement:
The produced of Darfur is Dying and Food Force is more than entertainment purpose, but it also for education purpose for the players to learn what is happening in the real world so they can give out some helps for those people in need.
Outline:
I. Introduction
II. Body 1, explain about Darfur is Dying and its education purpose.
III. Body 2, explain about Food Force and its education purpose.
IV. How these 2 games are more effective to educate kids than books and tv.
V. Conclusion
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1 comment:
The thesis statement is to the point and clear.Your support seems well planned are well thought out, but are you going to have any counterarguments in your essay?
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